Welcome to my learning portfolio. I go to Burnham School - Te Kura o Tiori. This portfolio shows some of the work I am most proud of. Please join me and give me some positive feedback.
Wednesday, May 29, 2013
Monday, May 20, 2013
100 WC Depths of Despair
It was a bright sunny day i was swimming at the beach as i got deeper
And deeper into the water it got darker and darker when I was deep in the ocean. Suddenly a noise was faraway it got louder and louder then
Anything when i looked behind me and at first I didn't know what it was
But when I could see properly I saw a giant galactapus. It had one eye, eight arms and it had bubbles for a body. His body colour was black as a plug. For a few minutes it was just floating there but then it chased me so far but luckily I had swam up on the shore. He could not get to me!
By Taylah
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